Open Poetry #34 |
A Weaver Of Words |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Jim Warren * * * Dedicated to a fellow poet whose words inspired me to write this * * * Some people come into our lives They're like a breath of fresh air Your words took me on a journey Upon the page your heart lay bear Your words came from the heart You seemed much older than your years As I took out another tissue And began to dry my tears I felt so much emotion As I read your words in rhyme You were the weaver of a tapestry I saw your heart in every line Your words took me to the ocean Where I could feel the salty spray I heard a seagull's mournful cry As he flew out across the bay I saw the window to your soul And the depth of your despair I felt your pain and sadness Sometimes life can be unfair Your words have touched so many As you let your heart unfurl Through my words I'd like to thank you For sharing your talent with the world * * * "Some people come into our lives and quickly go.Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts so we are never the same" I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang, this is a very lovely tribute. .....jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very nice to see you being moved by the poets words |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, I am so glad I dropped in to read this beautiful poem. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
kindness and compassion woven in your words -your heart shows in your gift Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Suetang, I LOVE THIS!!! Reminds me of someone very dear to my heart...whose words are held within these pages of Passions as well. Thank you for the tears and the smiles tonight. Hugs to you m'friend!! -- Becka [p.s. I am gonna keep this one. ] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
nicely done suetang |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful picture, beautiful words! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sue with your beautiful expressed rhymes ... you have touch my heart so many times Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I saw the window to your soul And the depth of your despair I felt your pain and sadness Sometimes life can be unfair yes indeed they do and they are most loved. Sue, this was marvelous...oh, how the sea is so beautiful.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I think that many people can relate to this, after being deeply moved by something they have read. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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