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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2005-01-31 10:16 AM


I long for that echo, silenced.
Granite canyons played your voice;
staccato, sure...
now, quiet as sand.

Where are the monuments, high piled?
Currents gnaw like eons in a wink,
till all I see is desert,
without mirage.

I whispered your name
toward open nothingness,
and wait for the miracle
of return.

© Copyright 2005 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
1 posted 2005-01-31 10:18 AM


like this a lot.
seems to "echo" my
own thoughts as of late

wonderful piece i'd like to print out, if i may.


snow

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2005-01-31 10:29 AM


snow, no need to ask . . . but you certainly may!  thanks for the kind words

Rf

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displaced
3 posted 2005-01-31 11:05 AM


this is beautiful

that last verse really touches

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-01-31 11:08 AM


waiting for the miracle of return

flowing and most beautiful

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-01-31 11:16 AM


a beautiful emotion runs through this....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2005-01-31 11:26 AM


Miracles do happen ~ and may you have yours!


EA

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