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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Oh i wandered in darkness, within a velvet softness. Lost, searching for a chink, a fuzzy light. My eyes could not see, my mind glimpsed you. Then glowing, you shone a light into my heartworld. Parting darkest mackrell skies, your sun beamed love. To warm my heart, trigger my dreamsmile. Fainting weak with emotion, hungry, empty of food, full with love. Vitality you brought, when you came to my notion. On a whim i gave you the universe, just to bathe within the beam of your morning heart of honeyed radiance. To nurture this kind of love again, is my quest. Come bring me dreams of love, like armfulls of wild flowers, ocean deep is my heart. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (01-31-2005 08:02 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To warm my heart, trigger my dreamsmile. enjoyed your thoughts, Phil...especially that last word  M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you Maureen, it is so nice to be appreciated, yes i have a dreamsmile, i see it in my dreams, laughing in utopian greenfields, filled with animals, birds and bees and fantastic hued wildflowers... Golodenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A very lovely poem..by the way you might want to check the spelling for radiance... just trying to help. ~ARh  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you for the reply ARH, and please do not try to help with my spelling, it was an error made in haste trying to post it, i am working on other things while keeping an eye on this forum too, not engaged in ''sticky beaking''... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ocean deep is my heart there is a tremendous effect of emotions which changes a person....love is universal and good...as are your words |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
To nurture this kind of love again, is my quest. Come bring me dreams of love, like armfulls of wild flowers, ocean deep is my heart. that is a very tight stanza as well as being my favorite. why? because you didn't just keep showing me everything, you let me feel it...like that a lot, phil. hugs.. S~ ~~~~~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a beautifully poetic soul you have. You radiate love into the world with your gentle and sensitive poetry. As you give, so may you receive...  Love & Light, Linda |
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