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Open Poetry #34

Entity

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-01-27 11:59 PM

Why am I so dumb?
Why am I so narrow-minded?
Why am I so cold?
Why do I feel hate?
I cannot be your entity.
Sit back and watch me fall,
Your name is all I call.
Why am I so dumb?
Why am I so narrow-minded?
Why am I so cold?
Why do I feel hate?
I cannot be your entity.
Sit back and watch me burn,
Twist of fate made a wrong turn.
Why am I so dumb?
Why am I so narrow-minded?
Why am I so cold?
Why do I feel hate?
I cannot be your entity.
Keep loving you is what I'll do,
Becuase we know our love is true.
Why am I so dumb?
Why am I so narrow-minded?
Why am I so cold?
Why do I feel hate?
I cannot be your entity.

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2005-01-28 12:28 PM

how love is in constant mix with hate...interesting way of putting it...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-01-28 12:30 PM

i like the feel of this~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-01-28 12:35 PM

A Fine line between love and hate...you have expressed it very powerfully!

~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2005-01-28 08:29 PM

its good to read your writing again

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-01-31 11:08 AM

Hot Flakes, this poem is one power-packed house of emotion! It literally seemed to spill right from your guts! ~ and you do that sooo well!

Sending you a warm hug,
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-31 11:29 AM

yeah...I ask myself the same things

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