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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Why am I so dumb? Why am I so narrow-minded? Why am I so cold? Why do I feel hate? I cannot be your entity. Sit back and watch me fall, Your name is all I call. Why am I so dumb? Why am I so narrow-minded? Why am I so cold? Why do I feel hate? I cannot be your entity. Sit back and watch me burn, Twist of fate made a wrong turn. Why am I so dumb? Why am I so narrow-minded? Why am I so cold? Why do I feel hate? I cannot be your entity. Keep loving you is what I'll do, Becuase we know our love is true. Why am I so dumb? Why am I so narrow-minded? Why am I so cold? Why do I feel hate? I cannot be your entity. does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
how love is in constant mix with hate...interesting way of putting it... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 i like the feel of this~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Fine line between love and hate...you have expressed it very powerfully! ~ARh  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
its good to read your writing again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot Flakes, this poem is one power-packed house of emotion! It literally seemed to spill right from your guts! ~ and you do that sooo well! Sending you a warm hug, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...I ask myself the same things |
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