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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Toxic dump, polluted, acid, From your fountain, I did drink, Believeing with sincere heart, that the water was pure, but not, it was tainted, Advertising to every woman, like a male whore, lending out your soul, that was toxic, My stomache became sour, no nourishment do you offer, a cake, filled with fluff, leaving me starving, hungry still, yet my heart bloated, like a cream puff, In vomit, my soul was floating, sick of your gloating, to the eye and tongue, sweet to taste, to the heart and soul, sour to the stomache, waste..... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-31-2005 09:38 PM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very full of spite, not romantic at all really,..but interesting nonetheless, you found the bile within and offered it to the world, well done... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank-you for the gift given! It seems there is a lot of waste floating about today! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Goldenrose~when bile is all you receive it is easy to write about it~ Especially when it falls like rain, all over you.... some relationships are toxic...emotionally, physically, mentally! ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes Kevin, I agree, one needs to call the toxic clean-up crew....you know the kind that wears the white suits and cleans up messes. The enviorment is unhealthy! Thank you! ~ARh |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
ARH do you see ANY bile spilling from my poems lately? As far as i am concerned i have only kind and healing words to inpart upon these pages, being bitter and twisted while the world moves along without you means that you may be missing out on something truly wonderful, i dont waste my time whith bitter and twisted sentiments, life's too short...have a lovely day, take care... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I will have a lovely day, week, month, years....and my heart is not bitter, you are jumpimg to conclusions.Neither am I twisted..... Personal attacks are not welcome on PIP, nor to me! ~ARH |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
May you have a great year ARH, put personal attacks dressed up in disguise as ''poetry'' is also not allowed, as is a few other things not allowed on pip but you manage to get away with it dont you? Regards. Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you spelled vomit wrong. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have watched this relationship over time. You two are both beautiful people. The love you had was expressed here in beautiful poetry. Love is not all beautiful poetry though, especially when it comes to an end. Bottom line is...it was there once. I hate to see a thread like this. There's no need for either of you to reply to the other's poetry if this is the way it turns out. Live and let live. Write and let write. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I really feel no need to explain my poem...when most poets don't... but to let everyone know..just as I have informed Phil...this was not intended for Goldenrose or anyone else at PIP... It is personal and a new way for me to heal from past experiances, that i am now just being freed from emotionally and coming to terms with. Thanks for all your replys and for reading! Thanks Dixie you know especially what I am talking about, thanks for understanding. Love and Hugs~ ~ARH |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I had a bad cream puff once, although it didn't taste as bad as this one.  This is one spirited poem, whatever inspired it, can create great poetry. I think most of my interesting poems came from some emotional termoile, our emotions create energy that needs to be let out. I try not to respond to a poem I may think is about me, I find it safer that way...lol And truthfully who could know but me and i'd be only guessing. Passions hasn't changed much since i've been gone, its time to bring up the old rumour poem for a run...lol Maybe i'll put some of these new rumours in it to stir up some trouble. Enjoyed the read... and the replies. Keep feeding those poetry fires. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Parker..  Love ya! ~ARh |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Actually, ARH, I think this is one of your better ones. Sometimes, we just need to get things out, don't we?!  ....jo |
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