These Valentine Considerations

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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-01-30 10:51 AM

These Valentine Considerations

Grant me this minute,
this instant when vermilion essays stamp my wearied soul anew.

The argument…

new-sprung splendors in wantonness
stitch lascivious calenture loose with chasms.
Throbbing eroticism rubs gently,
you to me…
me to you,
for we are but impatience
waiting on the silver-gilt annex of twilight.

To forbear,
naiveté in no lucid copulation,
O’ so hastens the freight train thumping of lubricity.
As language alludes to the adulteration
where flesh and urgency hammer closure in moans of ecstasy,
flesh crushed to flesh,
need pressed to want,
and the last movement but a heave to insensibleness.

These Valentine considerations
are bequeathed in undulations of sensuality.

Even in the unobtrusive arrangement of a kiss,
earnestness cachet's the skin on unchaste silken sheets,
where you run practiced fingers,
that scorch shamelessly,
over argillaceous appetite.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-01-30 11:23 AM

Very hot.
TD

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2005-01-30 11:50 AM

Sizzles with hotness.
You reading my mind again. :-)
I'll send you e-mail with the rest of comment.
Love this piece yes I do.

;-)

Hugs
Amour Vous

Within this heart you'll find love

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-30 11:52 AM

No wonder all the snow has melted around here - whew! This is so sexy and sensuous - wish there was a snowbank close by to throw myself into!

Considerations well considered here -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-30 12:39 PM

Enjoyed!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2005-01-30 08:52 PM

love when you throw us those ten dollar words :-)

damn, i think this is the hottest piece i've read from you.seriously... you alluded to, but never been so ... well, wow. steamy. and very beautiful. leave to you to make me like a poem with "valentine" in the title :-) hugsss... me

and.. susan, LOL i think you should go rub against those castle walls.. heehee.

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-01-30 10:21 PM

Your minute has been granted...or maybe an hour...or two....

Oh what words thou hath spoken, sting thy ears....and pierce this heart...setting thy soul afire!

Passion drips from every word, like sweet raspberries....I eat them one by one...
mmmmm....delicious you are!

Love your new photo!

~love and Hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

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