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Inquisitive Eyes
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Inquisitive Eyes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Inquisitive Eyes Through frosty mists of winter sleep In hands of time my heart to keep On tiptoe glance fond ever last Beyond the future to the past Avail by veil in gloved regress A glimpse aloft and well impressed In tempo slowed and pale consort A close behold and wild retort Dessert of mind dispensed and smiled Beneath the dove flown high and mild The mountains skin shed white and thin Below to coat and wandered wind And land of visions seek the sun To find cohesive set and done Beneath the mask of common ground Peruse the places soft and round Auspicious sights to call by name And look in overcast to rain On frosty mists of winter sleep The hands of time my heart to keep Copyright Kkh 01/29/05 |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I was waiting for this post TD. I seen you wandering around the forum and knew it was only a matter of time before you gifted me with a poem this morning. Loved it! This is a true delight for mine eyes this day. Hugs! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed the view -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...this is just beautiful |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
No jagged edges found here. Your poem is smoooooth as silk and so so soothing to the mind and spirit. Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD Nice words. Dave |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding with lighthousebob here silk is the word for you lady! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh leave of me thy waking dreams that I might smile in wandering. Oh flow with me the earthen streams that I might dwell in pondering. Oh leave me not thy slumber's quest or bask alone the wand'ring moon. For here thee lie in morn of rest.. in wait the cry of lonesome loon. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This lovely octameter was a pleasant sleigh ride this morning. Poets against the war is redundant |
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