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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-01-25 07:23 PM

I'm inside my hair
My hair is on my head
My hair covers my head
You can't see my head for my hair
You can't see me through the hair
The fixtures of my mental brainwaves blocked by hair
Static electric fried and stiffened hair

I cut my hair
You see my skull
Bone matter just under skin
A little patience
Listening to curses
Peak at the little me without hair
See my skull

Split my skull and there's no more to see
Just the blood
That ran through the parts
Never understood
And now in the streets
Where I should've stood
Even without my hair
Still just the blood
And still misunderstood

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2005-01-25 11:17 PM

lol, why did you post this in open? silly boy...anyways, it's interesting...it's about hair...cool.

- River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-01-27 08:01 AM

Is it a bad thing to post in open? I'll admit maybe it would go better classified as a dark poem. I mean it does leave an image of a bloody brownish color with chunks of muck and hair on the side of the street. Hair is cool.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-01-28 08:36 AM

Craig,

you said it all right here:

Just the blood
That ran through the parts
Never understood

I think only we, here, understand each other and sometimes at that. One day you will meet that one soul that just loves some obscure book or piece of music and you will just SMILE.

I have missed you.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-01-30 12:32 PM

Thank you littlewing, I've missed you too.

Wow, that could be taken two ways. Find that one soul which could be some undiscovered part of myself, or my treasure. SMILES.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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