Open Poetry #34 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
soon to be supper simmered as the sun went to the town side of the rooster grady's pen I spun the handle on ol betsy at the hydrant at the corner and watched the river from darral's farm get lower as his mud crop grew jody sue milked the goats and made butter from their yeild lil barney helped with the crocks wore his davy crockett hat that the chickens pecked til the tail was shot with a musket ball at the alamo he said the crows are back again talking to the other me on the stick there at the corn them bibs were more friendly then these, from sears they got cheaper buttons that don't stay hooked in the snap ring when barney climbs his daddy tree looking for quarters in pockets to give to the coin wrap machine that is his banker for college some day if they ever let me out from behind these bars and the prision of my mind |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walk the fields more often let those blackbirds fly... this is Excellent... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the crows are back again talking to the other me on the stick there at the corn them bibs were more friendly then these, from sears they got cheaper buttons that don't stay hooked in the snap ring... enjoyed with a smile M |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
nice images |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
very nice...enjoyed this. ![]() ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
love the image of the little one climbing the daddy tree for coins - happy childhood memories - overalls and farms, haystacks and wheat fields - hanging out in the loft and jumping off barn roofs - yeah - happy childhood memories - enjoyed this tumble, D - the images let me walk scraped knee and barefoot again - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your mind indeed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I agree with Sunshine...really liked your style in this...so believable and real, yet full or your original way of writing with a sensitive pen. ![]() |
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