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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-01-29 07:46 AM

We

We walk in a field of grime where
Beginnings and ends grow in time
A field of wheat of different show
Some grow fast and some grow slow

Each a flower of different form
Some look cold and some look warm
They run in hue from red to gold
Some look young and some look old

They all grow well within the grass
And some grow mirrors made of glass
Some show beauty beyond belief
But the mirrored ones show of grief

And in the wind where shadows form
Are pools of blues beginnings storm
That holds the dew of let each morn
With buttercups to drink the dawn

It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-29 08:09 AM

It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay

exactly how I feel Sy~~

hugs
M

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-29 08:24 AM

Blue pages adrift
in fields of memory
this morning...

so many horizons to adore...

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2005-01-29 09:20 AM

Hi Seymour. What can I say? Loved it!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-29 10:22 AM

Great write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-01-29 11:31 AM

Sy

Lovely writing, wise man!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-29 11:34 AM

And in the wind where shadows form
Are pools of blues beginnings storm
That holds the dew of let each morn
With buttercups to drink the dawn

It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay

damn! I love this!

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