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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-29 07:46 AM


We

We walk in a field of grime where
Beginnings and ends grow in time
A field of wheat of different show
Some grow fast and some grow slow

Each a flower of different form
Some look cold and some look warm
They run in hue from red to gold
Some look young and some look old

They all grow well within the grass
And some grow mirrors made of glass
Some show beauty beyond belief
But the mirrored ones show of grief

And in the wind where shadows form
Are pools of blues beginnings storm
That holds the dew of let each morn
With buttercups to drink the dawn

It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay



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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-01-29 08:09 AM


It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay


exactly how I feel Sy~~

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-29 08:24 AM



Blue pages adrift
in fields of memory
this morning...

so many horizons to adore...






EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2005-01-29 09:20 AM


Hi Seymour. What can I say? Loved it!
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4 posted 2005-01-29 10:22 AM


Great write!

~Alli~

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Martie
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5 posted 2005-01-29 11:31 AM


Sy

Lovely writing, wise man!  

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-01-29 11:34 AM


And in the wind where shadows form
Are pools of blues beginnings storm
That holds the dew of let each morn
With buttercups to drink the dawn

It is a place we go each day
Where some would pass and some would stay


damn! I love this!

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