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Steady Footsteps In The Silver
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Steady Footsteps In The Silver |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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time slides quietly frozen moonbeams left behind Winter’s grinding pace parking lot prisms reflections of the season windows of the soul moments remembered pain’s absence isn’t pleasure heartache’s soft recall ©2005 by icebox |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"pain’s absence isn’t pleasure" such a simple truth too often forgotten |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, in order to be we need to feel. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well understood |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"pain’s absence isn’t pleasure" hmm. Pain's absence isn't pleasure. Pain's absence isn't pleasure. Pain's absence isn't pleasure. Pain's absence isn't pleasure. Pain's ab-- OH.  I was going to type that five hundred times, then I realized I could "copy and paste."  Pain's absence isn't pleasure? sigh It sure feels that way in the moment. But I quibble. Pain's absence isn't happiness, I nod and concede.  Damn, I love you.  thank you yet again |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Since you joined a couple of years ago, all of your verse has gained (PIP works!)...but in this mode the difference is striking....clearer, deeper, cleaner, more compelling. Well done, mon! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox All you wrote is so clear, but this "pain’s absence isn’t pleasure", made me stop and think, then nod. I hope you have warmed up a bit!  |
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