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Open Poetry #34

craziest day of my life

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

0 posted 2005-01-28 05:20 PM

This was the craziest day of my life.
The snow just wasn’t sticking.
I ran along the ice
And slid as far; as far as the road would take me.
This was the craziest day of my life.

And letters fell upon the knife;
A seal in hope of a lady waiting.
Puncture wounds to place the words,
Upon the heart of this lady in waiting.

This was the craziest day of my life.
A never-ending circular drive.
I placed my hand upon the knife;
The pulse it sent was so alive.
This was the craziest day of my life.

The sun came up and cleared the skies.
The day came forward and smeared the lies.
Till there were none; erased to white.
A perfect day from dawn to night.

This was the craziest day of my life.
The animals’ claws are out to fight.
They howl and howl; it is their right.
But, I haven’t an answer to give them light.
I’ll wait; I’ll wait for night.
For this is the craziest day of my life.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-28 08:03 PM

I really like this. Gutsy, thoughtful, edge on it.

Yes.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-01-28 08:05 PM

interesting tumble - one of those days? Enjoyed this-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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