Open Poetry #34 |
Bluebirds Weaving Time |
Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Poets weaving time in pictures Bluebirds painting tales in song I never knew I'd stay so long A graceful dance a spritely mixture And silent mouths with words so strong Its a lush meadow to belong |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it certainly is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And yes, we're certainly glad you have...stayed this long, that is. I hope you continue to share and post for your poetry is most welcome! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thank you both. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is so perfect, you know, just the feeling I was looking for. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
beautiful just beautiful I like this one. :-) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
enjoyed reading this...amazing. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Everyone: |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, couldn't agree more. Enjoyed and I am haunted |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Its a lush meadow to belong" That it is my friend, and we are so lucky to have the key to the gate of it..... It is an oasis that I look forward to, almost every night, to see what the "bluebirds" have painted and watch the beautiful words "dance" across the screen... ...and I don't have to knock at the gate...Poems such as these are the flowers that carpet that meadow... "Shall I meet other wayfarers at night? Those who have gone before. Then must I knock, or call when just in sight? They will not keep you waiting at that door." (Christina Rossetti Greatly enjoyed ------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, chirping here, a lovely write! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I'm glad you enjoyed guys Ice - Shall I meet other wayfarers at night? Those who have gone before. Then must I knock, or call when just in sight? They will not keep you waiting at that door." (Christina Rossetti "Uphill") Love this. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lovely writing |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow dont know if i was supposed to but i caught some imagery from it does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
bluebirds reflect happiness..... ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Yup Snowflake - you were supposed to A Romanic Heart - |
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