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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

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0 posted 2004-10-23 02:43 AM

Poets weaving time
in pictures
Bluebirds painting tales
in song
I never knew I'd stay
so long

A graceful dance
a spritely mixture
And silent mouths with words
so strong
Its a lush meadow
to belong

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-10-23 09:27 AM

yes, it certainly is

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-10-23 09:37 AM

And yes, we're certainly glad you have...stayed this long, that is. I hope you continue to share and post for your poetry is most welcome!

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-10-23 09:39 PM

Thank you both.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-10-23 09:55 PM

This is so perfect, you know, just the feeling I was looking for.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-10-24 12:28 PM

beautiful just beautiful

I like this one.

:-)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-10-24 12:50 PM

Nice...James

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-10-24 12:52 PM

enjoyed reading this...amazing.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

8 posted 2004-10-24 01:18 AM

Everyone:

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-10-24 03:04 AM

Yup, couldn't agree more.

Enjoyed

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-10-24 07:35 AM

"Its a lush meadow
to belong"

That it is my friend, and we are so lucky to have the key to the gate of it.....

It is an oasis that I look forward to, almost every night, to see what the "bluebirds" have painted and watch the beautiful words "dance" across the screen...
...and I don't have to knock at the gate...Poems such as these are the flowers that carpet that meadow...

"Shall I meet other wayfarers at night?
  Those who have gone before.
Then must I knock, or call when just in sight?
  They will not keep you waiting at that door."

(Christina Rossetti "Uphill")
Greatly enjoyed
------ice/ford
  ><>

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2004-10-24 01:56 PM

LOL, chirping here, a lovely write!

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

12 posted 2004-10-24 11:26 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed guys

Ice - Shall I meet other wayfarers at night?
  Those who have gone before.
Then must I knock, or call when just in sight?
  They will not keep you waiting at that door."

(Christina Rossetti "Uphill")

Love this.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-10-25 11:33 AM

Lovely writing

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

14 posted 2005-01-28 12:10 PM

wow dont know if i was supposed to but i caught some imagery from it

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

15 posted 2005-01-28 01:11 AM

bluebirds reflect happiness.....

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

16 posted 2005-01-28 08:13 PM

Yup Snowflake - you were supposed to

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