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Krawdad
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0 posted 2005-01-28 03:57 PM




                       Longing for a conversation
                       but wary of the inauthentic
                       and the charm

                       I hold my breath
                       as long as I can
                       staring at this drop of ink


  
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RSWells
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1 posted 2005-01-28 04:11 PM


Well we'll just sit here soundlessly and stare at a warming fire, neither investing nor withdrawing. Peace my friend.

Poets against the war is redundant

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-01-28 08:09 PM


I like your words.

Dave

Susan
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3 posted 2005-01-28 08:10 PM


Come, sit with me in the still of the house, comforted by the golden glow of lamplight, and we'll quietly sip hot chocolate and enjoy the lack of words -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Copperbell
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4 posted 2005-01-28 08:35 PM


I always enjoy your poems Krawdad.  
Martie
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California
5 posted 2005-01-28 09:02 PM


Krawdad

I am suffering from the same lack!  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-01-28 09:08 PM


*sigh* Such quiet poignant moments make for good blues music and poetry, but are not much fun; but sure can beat false conversation.
But keep the ink pen handy.

MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2005-01-29 02:16 AM


I too, enjoy your words~


nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2005-01-29 09:04 AM


Me too~~


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*Alli4000*
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9 posted 2005-01-29 10:25 AM


Wow...nice write!

~Alli~

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