No memories nor visions of you

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Open Poetry #34

No memories nor visions of you

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-01-28 10:31 AM

No memories nor visions of you
or hands held together in unity.
We were never seen together
just in verses and rhyme, an text of love.

Night brought the living to silent death
where in dreams they experinced the spiritual rest.
No memories nor visions of you
created my own little world out of the blue.

And out of the blue you were with me too
hands locked together in unity.
I knew if i woke i'd be laid in an empty room
so never woke to the rest of my days.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-01-28 12:02 PM

Man. This is so profound.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-02-03 09:09 PM

Agree with JL.

Dave

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-02-05 11:45 AM

May the visions of your love become the reality in your waking hours!

Love & Light,
EA

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-02-05 03:44 PM

Nice write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-02-05 04:00 PM

The dream of love never tires us.

This is so beautiful, dear Lee.

Love, Margherita

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