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poe
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0 posted 2005-02-05 12:17 PM


A broken down palace where the world begins and ends
The only thing that makes it easier is plenty of friends
Fragile lines carve the way to existence
Living  with out love is a hard means of subsistence
Times' perpetual drum slows it's deafening beat
When love jumps into the drivers seat
To be like Romeo and Juliet with love set in concrete
To be able to find a love which turns poison sweet
Living those tired cliches
To be like the sun shining bright even it's dieing days
Love cause you to be born again
Water begins to taste like champagne
Becoming a ghost of your former self
A love so strong it moves a continental shelf
Lost amongst the waves of time
Life has become sublime
Locked in a lovers pact
Leaving this world with your humanity in tact

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2005 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-05 11:16 AM


This is a very under-stated set of words.

I like the subtle but it is maybe too well hidden and poems on this site often receive no more than a minute or more if it is a friend.

I like it.

dave

Margherita
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2 posted 2005-02-05 03:57 PM


Very beautiful!

Indeed, love is NOW.

Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-02-05 04:00 PM


Very nice write poe! Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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