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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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music placed on a virtual palm of pretension. my patience tested by imitation and a face of artistic smile. i laugh, cruelly opting the act. more more pain of misunderstanding, posing to maximum creativity and the love in you hates me. taken fit in my fate. modulated… your acceptance rimes my wine to the unacceptable |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A whirling dervish of mutual contentiousness and admiration. The best comedians despise their audiences. Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah fascinating |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Petre~ 'pain of misunderstanding, posing to maximum creativity and the love in you hates me.' There is a tender ache in the read of this penning~ Touching ... very touching~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sad, very touching yes :squeezing: |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, dittoing RSW Well done, Pandonov... don't be such a stranger |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
very deep, mysterious, I love a good mystery~ ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
my patience tested by imitation Yes... it would be... you see too clearly to be satisfied with pretenders. Excellent!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
pandonov The sound and texture of this is very pleasing! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
music placed on a virtual palm of pretension. my patience tested by imitation and a face of artistic smile. i laugh, cruelly opting the act. I have never cared for false pretenses either. Your writing is flawless, well done sir. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there was a time in my life, when I didn't nor couldn't believe there were people like this...raised in a small town...very small town...we were sheltered...and when I look back now, can't help but think, my, ohhhh my, did we live in a fantasy... Your writes are fabulous |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I echo LeeJ ...Fabulous! Maree and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like the use of contrasting emotions that I felt from reading your poem and I am in a humorous way reminded here that opposites do attract. (Smiles) Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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