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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2005-01-27 05:07 PM


music placed on a virtual palm of pretension.
my patience tested by imitation
and a face of artistic smile.
i laugh,
cruelly opting the act.

more
more

pain of misunderstanding, posing to maximum creativity
and the love in you hates me.

taken fit in my fate.

modulated…

your acceptance
rimes my wine
to the unacceptable  


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RSWells
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1 posted 2005-01-27 05:13 PM


A whirling dervish of mutual contentiousness and admiration. The best comedians despise their audiences. Enjoyed

Poets against the war is redundant

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-01-27 05:16 PM


ah

fascinating

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3 posted 2005-01-27 08:27 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-01-27 08:48 PM


Petre~

'pain of misunderstanding, posing to maximum creativity
and the love in you hates me.'


There is a tender ache in the read of this penning~

Touching ... very touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-01-27 10:36 PM


sad, very touching yes :squeezing:


Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-01-27 10:43 PM


Yes, dittoing RSW

Well done, Pandonov...

don't be such a stranger


A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2005-01-27 11:19 PM


very deep, mysterious,
I love a good mystery~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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8 posted 2005-01-28 09:16 AM


my patience tested by imitation

Yes... it would be... you see too clearly to be satisfied with pretenders.

Excellent!!!

Martie
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9 posted 2005-01-28 09:55 AM


pandonov

The sound and texture of this is very pleasing!

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-01-28 11:58 AM


music placed on a virtual palm of pretension.
my patience tested by imitation
and a face of artistic smile.
i laugh,
cruelly opting the act.

I have never cared for false pretenses either.  Your writing is flawless,
well done sir.

LeeJ
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11 posted 2005-01-28 12:40 PM


there was a time in my life, when I didn't nor couldn't believe there were people like this...raised in a small town...very small town...we were sheltered...and when I look back now, can't help but think, my, ohhhh my, did we live in a fantasy...

Your writes are fabulous

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2005-01-28 03:00 PM


I echo LeeJ ...Fabulous!

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Lighthousebob
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13 posted 2005-01-28 04:45 PM


I like the use of contrasting emotions that I felt from reading your poem and I am in a humorous way reminded here that opposites do attract. (Smiles) Enjoyed reading. -Bob
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