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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-01-26 09:46 AM



He stroked her image
across a whisper with
artists' brush

hushed

white pearls bearing 'pon
chisled lip to concentrate
details of her face with
each lift of maestro wrist

he

defined her form by
caress and press of fingers
soft as wisps 'til she
shuddered into view through
carefully chosen hues

of his love...


~tier

© Copyright 2005 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-26 12:06 PM



iwihwt....



beautiful!

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2005-01-26 12:22 PM


there's always S*U*N*S*H*I*N*E*




~tier

GG
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3 posted 2005-01-26 12:29 PM


Very tender,
this paints beautiful images.
Well done!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-26 04:21 PM


Like it.

Dave

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2005-01-26 07:10 PM


Beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

littlewing
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6 posted 2005-01-27 12:24 PM


and all art is created from love, yes?
This is beautiful, Tier.

Susan
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7 posted 2005-01-27 01:22 PM


big *sigh* -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Ericc
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8 posted 2005-01-27 04:30 PM


Oh wow!

Eric

Christopher
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9 posted 2005-01-27 04:41 PM


sigh-ti-ful
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2005-01-27 06:49 PM


Very softly written...James
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11 posted 2005-01-27 11:03 PM


beautiful


Enotneicna
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12 posted 2005-01-28 01:51 AM


whisper soft pen strokes
fashion such a rendering
truly lovely

always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2005-01-28 01:59 AM


Love inspires all the arts~

Great title~

~ARH

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14 posted 2005-01-28 07:58 AM


soft light and music flickers off your words...lovely
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15 posted 2005-01-28 10:44 AM


No one does this quite as well
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Dark Angel
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17 posted 2005-01-28 03:09 PM


simply beautiful Tier.

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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