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Open Poetry #34

Human Like Bribes

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-01-27 07:43 AM

Watching the world
Brown undertones
Worried image
Quatrain of ocean waves
Swift and unwearied
Reinforced meaning, smacking
Strong impacts
Deepens scorning sail
Of the little people
Pulsing from a heart of antique frame
Primeval circling whirls
Plunging sirens
100 feet
O’er first-time events
Zombie ominous feelings
Growing teeth and hair
Looking out
Great padlocked fences
Drinking possibility
Hum of undergrowth
Crack of fire
Bombing human screams
And bamboo wind chimes
Chocking upstairs corridors
Insistent on self insistent
From end to end
The bells call, strength of seams
Where a mother weeps
For a faceless child
On a moonshine highway
Digesting surrender
“NO, No!!!” cries the direct mind while
Conundrum magazines stand in line
Binging on love letters
From a secret grave
Where words look up with powerful thrust
“Heaven knows what is undone:
Lecture notes secretes body images
Rare wood of hallowed bone
Milking fine sense
From aircraft chaperones
In a sallow city, sounding wet
Pollinating shivers of innovation
Blizzard mantras fists of light
Rushing to print the future

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2005-01-27 07:53 AM

Wow great writing very much enjoyed it

Julie

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-01-27 07:56 AM

LeeJ
Yes it does seem a mixed up world, good morning sweet.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-01-27 10:47 AM

Could sense confusion/hectic/calamity living paced sometimes much to fast and furious.

Enjoyed... Lee J.

JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-01-27 01:35 PM

I had the sense of eyes seeing the woes in the world - especially those of recent events - makes me want to toss some sunshine and love into the air and watch it rain joy

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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