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Open Poetry #34

Travels 1

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-01-27 06:20 AM

To roam from far place to place,
Enduring the road
Just to again see their face;
Intervening there
A pebble tossed in a pond,
Carefully I’ve thrown
Hoping ripples carry on
To the shore with care,
I could not stay there to see
That pebble placed in gently.

Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-27 06:52 AM

beautiful

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-27 05:44 PM

Yep!
Very nice.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-01-27 08:27 PM

Enjoyed!

~Alli~

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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

4 posted 2005-01-28 12:00 PM

very nice

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

5 posted 2005-01-28 08:31 PM

Such simple scenes that make the reader ponder

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2005-01-28 09:52 PM

Thank you all
Pleased you enjoyed

Gloom

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2005-01-28 10:53 PM

An exercise in perspective, with many dimensions....I like this.

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