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Open Poetry #34

Reverie Of Clouds

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2005-01-27 05:29 AM

The chambers of my dreams,
echo with the songs of angels.
Sunshine beams on ripening corn and white foaming streams,
and wind chimes timbre in jingle- jangles.

Birds sweetly sing to praise the day,
dew dripped from flowers in woodlands.
Air redolent with scent, for this to God i pray,
blossom opened to the world in their thousands.

Cushioned turf where i lay down to drift,
clover, daisies and buttercups caressed my fingers.
On meandering clouds i was taken, up above did i lift,
overcome, my feelings heightened by those seraphic singers.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2005-01-27 05:32 AM

I love how you share vivid details, what an experiance,I felt as though I was there, smelling the buttercups and watching you touch them!

Loved this one!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-27 03:59 PM

Very nice. I enjoyed the read.

JL

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