Open Poetry #34 |
Loves' Last Dance |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Tonight is the night to end all nights, As we dance holding eachother tight, Softly you whisper, I love you so much, I begin to quiver as I feel your touch, The touch of your hand, gliding across my face, You take me to worlds beyond this place, You and I have had good memories and bad, through the years we have been happy and sad, I love you, I hate you, I am so confused, I can't live with you, nor can I live without you, So the melody of lifes' tune keeps playing in loves full bloom, But you and I have had our chance, Love has come and gone, This is Loves' last dance... Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-27-2005 05:06 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very sad, but well written, and as usual you share your heart with all, and that is something i shall always hold in high regard...thank you.. Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you ever so much for YOUR words...I hold them close to my heart~ ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree, very sad but a great presentation, and poem. JL |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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