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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-01-27 04:10 AM




Tonight is the night to end all nights,
As we dance holding eachother tight,

Softly you whisper, I love you so much,
I begin to quiver as I feel your touch,

The touch of your hand, gliding across my face,
You take me to worlds beyond this place,

You and I have had good memories and bad,
through the years we have been happy and sad,

I love you, I hate you, I am so confused,
I can't live with you, nor can I live without you,

So the melody of lifes' tune keeps playing in loves full bloom,
But you and I have had our chance,
Love has come and gone,
This is Loves' last dance...


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-27-2005 05:06 AM).]

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2005-01-27 05:05 AM


Very sad, but well written, and as usual you share your heart with all, and that is something i shall always hold in high regard...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-01-27 05:10 AM


Thank you ever so much for YOUR words...I hold them close to my heart~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


JL
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3 posted 2005-01-27 03:18 PM


I agree, very sad but a great presentation, and poem.

JL

Ericc
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4 posted 2005-01-27 04:27 PM


Poignantly beautiful.

Eric

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