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Complete Nonsense on the absence of Chocolate
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Complete Nonsense on the absence of Chocolate |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A word appeared inside my head It wasn't as I went to bed It came as I was bending down It tickled my chin and then went around Caressed the parts that others miss Presented me with one large kiss The touch was all that it takes to rise And so I found my Mint Surprise Now mint isn't chocolic that I know I needed something long and slow And so a brain I quickly sort To find out what I really ought Then my lady, she appeared And kissed me soundly round the ears Kissed my neck and then my chest Who cares about chocolic Give me the rest |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
ha awesome does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Is organic life actually possible without chocolate????? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love this, romantic and whimsical at the same time  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
gotta smile at this - for me, give me love and chocolate - that's heaven - yes sirree Enjoyed this SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Must change my Critique message. I meant to take a break and I have from heavy poetry, but I do still comment. Snowflake From Hell Perry Como Song " Dream along with me, I'm on my way to the Stars". No. Dave icebox -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Is organic life actually possible without chocolate????? Dont know icebox I was always meat and two veg. Dave jellybeans love this, romantic and whimsical at the same time Pleased you like - it was some stupid words I wrote a long time ago and was too hyped up to think people might like them. Dave *Alli4000* Moderator -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! Thanks Alli. Take care Dave Susan -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- gotta smile at this - for me, give me love and chocolate - that's heaven - yes sirree Enjoyed this Susan How you thought about your words. A 10,000 gallon bath of chocolate and a small spoon are on their way. Take care Dave |
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