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Open Poetry #34

Falling to Where?

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2005-01-27 05:14 AM

I slipped and fell beyond the moment,
Just where was i now?
Did it realy matter?
Into the void of uncertain light.

Through the other side,
my journey began. On an odyssey to
my inner self, i saw things vividly.
Traits passed like roadsigns.

Signs spelled out my future,
while storms off in the distance,
forewarned of impending trauma.
Coming back i was suddenly empty, ravenous.

Rising, my relish for life renewed,
a sudden boldness and realisation,
that life could indeed be sweet,
was already beating in my heart, coursing through my veins.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2005-01-27 05:18 AM

I will always be here to hold your hand, so I can catch you when you fall~

Right before your eyes....it was there before you all the time...beating inside your heart!

Great poetry as usual!
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2005-01-27 05:44 AM

"I slipped and fell beyond the moment,
...
Through the other side,
...
Signs spelled out my future,
...
Rising, my relish for life renewed,"

Marvelous!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-27 10:44 AM

good stuff

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-01-27 11:02 AM

This was so calming and pure, sweet lines my friend...

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