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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-27 08:12 AM

I carry brimming buckets
of sunlight in the night
with my hands over the top
so none spills or even shows
and I feel the warm under
on my palms that love you

when they climb the pole
you gave me to get to heaven
when you are entertaining others
with the back bend bow
and bosom full of crickets
rubbing their legs

when your eye music seeps
from some egyptian windowless view
of cypress trees entwined
in a windless worship
of pyramids playing tents
over a one man army

waving his sheathless sword

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-27 08:19 AM

tried so to highlight one sentence, which turned into a paragraph and then the entire poem became my favorite...a love read filled to the brim with sensuous...kind, and caring. Thank you sir and a jolly good day to ya....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2005-01-27 08:21 AM

I carry brimming buckets
of sunlight in the night
with my hands over the top
so none spills or even shows
and I feel the warm under
on my palms that love you

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Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-01-27 08:22 AM

That was pretty cool, but I do believe if it hadn't been Moses it would have been another. This poem is cool. I kept expecting you to say something specific and it's like it left you hanging, wondering. Cool.

-GIS

Oh and I like your picture.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-27 08:39 AM

when your eye music seeps
from some egyptian windowless view
of cypress trees entwined
in a windless worship

~*~

There is sound in lines like these...
a low, crooning, sighwhispersound...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-01-27 11:21 AM

Beautiful, D!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-27 11:26 AM

I just sit here and smile, and smile - and think the most delectable things - love this poem D and all the magic woven into it-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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