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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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poetry... poe...try poet... tree of poet... seed planted tainted seed in bear... fruit of poet veiled frailed... nailed to a poet tree... ripened... in the skin of ready peel the real illusion mass confusion mass... contusion fallen bleeding... bleed plead the need of poet... bare... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is great work! To all the thoughts we've peeled before.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Original...beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poetess Vicky!! love the presentation of your poetic ponderings.... youre "branching out" in new directions.  lolgood to read you again girlie. well done.  Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Vicky, your roots continue to bloom great trees....loved this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Oh for the simple life. Wonderful write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very unique! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause! _________ice ><> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is amazing, Vic, you have accurately described each one of us. I love how your writng, rather YOU --> have just bloomed. I adore this, wish I had written it. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Vicky...it's so good to see you playing with words...this is great!!  |
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