Open Poetry #34 |
My Poetry is Glue |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
My Poetry is Glue Why then all the hyperbole if said is said, and all you want is free? Your chocolate carriage awaits, your highness! As your humble life’s escort I will bless your goings - with a wedding rose to attest the cake was indeed a pleasure, but I need a rest. Oh, and take your patented love with you cause it killed mans best friend: “Old-Blue” The front porch?No worry, it’s for firewood too. By the way, my poetry is glue! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An interesting write JL. I'm not sure I understand that part of your poetry is glue. The second verse was captured in a very crisp and strong worded edge. I liked this, it was different than your usual style. If your poetry is glue...it is cohesive, flexible and I'm stuck on it! TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
out with the bad, in with the good!! Well thought out write Yipppeeeee, its good to see you posting again...welcome home buddy....smiles and hugs Your poetry, my friend, is stuck on me...hmmmm, reminds me of a song I am stuck on bandaide cuz bandaides stuck on me....hehehhehe...will that be bobbing around in your head all day...sorry bro... Hugs to ya... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Nice cryptic writing Enjoyed it |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Pointed, sharp, excellent thrust - sad about the front porch, though - and poetry does keep us glued together when otherwise we might splinter - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now with this one, you do remind me of another poet of our own pages, yes, you do... However...this speaks of bile, as you wish it to, but no guile; no, I think not. Just, truism. |
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