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In Nature |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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In Nature Darkeness shaddowed dreary trees Underneath sat broken me Thinking to when life was fine Before blackness came and took my mind ~ ~ ~ Howling wind blew leaves from ground Where noone walked now not around Mind blurred hurt remembering you Arms wrapped on me before this came to ~ ~ ~ Chilled air flow within my place Hidden here from open space Incased my being surrounding me You're here though you're not seen ~ ~ ~ Rain drops fall onto the path Water runs an wets my mouth The taste of you comes back to me Incased in nature now you be "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Mind blurred hurt hard to get over that sometimes~~ M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed the entire poem, but the last few lines were amazing...encased in nature...wow |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice.....  ___________ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last verse! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I know the feeling. Enjoyed. JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sadly nodding my head and knowing this to well... hugs to you, well written. |
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