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beautie's curtain
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beautie's curtain |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Beautiful like the forests of youthfulness smeared with aged skins merged in unity. Comfort from within the knowledge of a sheltered home away from the world of stressful hair-pulling strains. None but few confess to house-ridden lifes where curtains become the night infront of light. Tears compare to waterfalls of peace and calmness falling into those open arms of acceptance many feelings breath and free themselves from you Escape the already rusted cages from within. Change is forbidden to the "Many-aged" over that age where "Middle-aged" finishes. Living alone is nothing but a chore of breathing death shall find you unworthy of even dying. When all but loneliness is a form of death itself as in heartbreak one must leave crying which one you choice the person or the soul. Left to rot amongst the many that have experinced the fall "life is but a rontined left unfinished" Never finished for man shall pick up the pieces. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A lot could be taken here. From a warning to vanity to agoraphobia and aging. Enjoyed (from a nearly housebound for two years) Poets against the war is redundant |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
powerfully executed...dramtically real...this was intense... |
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