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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Impressed you invited yourself into places you wanted with lies and you don’t hear me above your own talking besides it was just a line a comfortable two step a dance of me being behind celebrating in an ice waltz arrogance preformed for my slide you acted as if Thursday was a holiday, it wasn’t and you needn’t worry if you were trying to impress me more than you know you did your concrete steps left a watermark |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like there were a few wrinkles left behind from this pressing ..... ... but the words didn't need any starch!!  I'm impressed! lol |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Impressed by your poetic Impression. Enjoyed! JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm very impressed as well!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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