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Open Poetry #34

As You Were

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-01-23 07:37 PM

~ As You Were ~

An eagle in my mind
Whose wings left spray upon the dawn
Dew of pertinence spread to limitless altitudes
And all I ever could want in a man

Our differences were never indifferences
And lifted me to heights I would never attempt
In a fall deeper red and primitive than springs exempt
A deeper woman in the flesh

Raising my creative lights to heaven
Shining out a silhouette of femininity
That brought from dream to taste
As lips held bead just waiting to be heard

A whisper that taunts the echoed heart
In earnest breadth and tender wilderness
Exploring footfalls on the creek lines and silent snow
To see you soar my skies enfold my eyes in happiness

Copyright Kkh 01/23/04

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-01-23 09:32 PM

such passion Kathleen....and to sit here
is a travesty....for your words surely are
a gift to each of us all...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2005-01-23 09:56 PM

"As lips held bead just waiting to be heard"

a sensual image, that.

always a lovely visit with you Kathleen.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-01-23 10:04 PM

wow goosebumps
felt alot here

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2005-01-24 04:11 PM

A whisper that taunts the echoed heart
In earnest breadth and tender wilderness
Exploring footfalls on the creek lines and silent snow
To see you soar my skies enfold my eyes in happiness

Truly wonderful lines.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-01-24 04:45 PM

I like this a lot TD.

Dave

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-01-24 05:42 PM

Wow! This is a big WOW!
Beautiful sentiment in this write!

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-24 06:19 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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