Open Poetry #34 |
Broken |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Broken there are no angry words in suffering my heart breaks as I die by degree there is nothing to touch with nothing in reach sleep brings tearless silence as dreams slip awake gone why did my heart turn and betray me in a now lonely bed with the distance of incomplete how do I breathe when my lungs won’t fill and there is no soothing in a world outside that has survived and here inside my knees are buckled and bent in crawl my skin is much too sensitive I don’t understand it either and wish it would change so I call on an angel but I hear… they fall broken too just some words cut out from the diary of my heart [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-24-2005 03:50 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I definitely know and understand this feeling you expressed so well, Helen It's always good to read your words hugs M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"there are no angry words in suffering my heart breaks as I die by degree" "my skin is much too sensitive" gawd... Helen?... I know this place too well... feeling this one deeply, my friend... hugs... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is resally sad. I like the mood you set and I can relate. Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
:sqeeze: this brings tears |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Heartbreak really doesn't come from failing to be yourself. It most often comes from being brave enough to be who you are in spite of the heartbreak. Remember that, and eventually you won't need angels -- or devils. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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