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Resurrection Mary |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Snow falls On Archer Avenue Late at night The streetlamps cast A pale glow It’s at times like these The mind plays tricks On even the wisest eyes And someone will say To himself he saw Youth The man I was My first love Risen from the dead |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide I saw this challenge, and I thought (at first) how well the subject would lend itself to a Ballad or even an Ode. Then I thought how much better it would be if you answered your own challenge. I was right. You see beyond illusions... your poetry is like watercolor. wisps and puddles layered |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
serenity blaze, Thank you. This was a CBE on the theme. I knew it couldn’t possibly be written by me from her perspective so I responded differently. I really hope others make an attempt. Thanks again. John P.S. CBE chinese brush experience a poem written without change except for minor punc, caps, and such |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent. You wrote of her well. I enjoyed the link you gave us...and I shall give the issue some thought and perhaps brew up something of my own. |
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