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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-24 10:25 AM


Victors on horses
Yet an ode to spinning words
Mouths of rivers
Walking with giants
Strumming deep inner roots
Like unfurling banners
Bards of mystic overflows
Their boats set sail
Oiled the living
Ripples of naked births
In all seasons of life
Stirring into epiphany
Savors small changes
Roaring brotherhoods
Steaming through moors
Echoing great depth
Of secret worlds
Praying for an easier fate
Highland crystal green venues
Genteel chateau
Where all silent voices read
Serene people nestle in to listen
Warming faces
Hands that reach
A royal wedding of tongues
Offering future’s lustrous dome
Living there till it burns
Bards of handsome inspiration


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JL
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1 posted 2005-01-24 10:40 AM


Sounds like a great honor to walk with Giants…

(…. But I think the Jets did better this year??)
Just kidding!

Great write Lee J.

JL


LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-24 10:51 AM


Yeah EAGLES!!!  Yippeeee, we're going to the Super Bowl.....

Thanks JL, for reading and commenting....I suppose the movie Troy was the inspiration...this is about the great masters and their flow of words...they are the giants....

Hugs to ya

JL
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3 posted 2005-01-24 11:21 AM


Nah!  You’re a Giant!  In poetry and Verse!!!


The New England Patriots??
OH-Please!  I hope they lose, lose, lose…


JL

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-01-24 11:23 AM


Yes, if they lose, then we'll be the winners...look out Philadelphia....PARTY!!!

You should have seen it last night....it was fun....everyone was so passionate about the win and the fact that we're finally making it to the Super Bowl....


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5 posted 2005-01-24 09:15 PM


When I read the title,  the first thing
that came to mind was the great ones who
have been the inspiration of millions with
their words and the visions their pens have
painted. Yes,  we do walk with Giants, don't
we?

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2005-01-24 11:37 PM


Vivid and yet stark imagery, laced together like a primal scream

you are always an intriguing read lady, but this is so visual it just grabbed me

wow

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