Open Poetry #34 |
short slip of a wish |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
wearing winter's gray sunshine, moonshine, starshine bliss sweet summertime wish s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bingo! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Sunshine - now could you send a little of that sun my way? Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Though wearing winter's gray, your poem here has a musical rhythm to it that left me feeling quite cheery sitting here in the fog. (Smiles) Thanks dear poetess. -Bob |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks Bob - glad I could bring you a smile - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it is a balmy 80 here just got off the black itch almost too warm to ride with a shirt on dang I miss the blizzards (grin) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ooooooo - think I'm going to come clobber you for dangling your hot little - um - climate in my face - no fair! Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice. JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks JL - appreciate your letting me know you stopped by - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
absolutelyawesomepicture,settingthescreenonfire! Wow! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Perfect! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How blissful is this! Loved your title too, Susan~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry - I blush - thank you dear Sir Alli- always a pleasure to see your name Bluesie - thanks my friend - for the kind reply Eric - too kind - thank you Hugs all - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh hell, i love this title! and what follows... excellent, susan!! "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you dear Snow - am sooo ready for summertime and all the magic its lingering days and balmy nights bring - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
mad eme smile but I think I would like a dose of spring first |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh....nice one |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, you would wear it well, of this I have no doubt...well done! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Beki, Dixie and Barry - for your kind replies and your friendship- We've spring like weather of late - 40s and sunshine - been balm for the soul Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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