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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-24 07:50 AM



one is a lady today
her sunday funday is over
and her straps are back up
keeping some valley snug

on each side of the wheels
of the iron men's pretty things
with their thump thump rattle
and a brag that scatters

like drops from their noses
when the wind moves their beards
to the otherside of their faces
and blurrs their eyes

more than the jacks did
when they played with the boys
down at the chey stand
of smokin ribs and the tattoo'd bottom

on a doe with white tipped nails

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Dark (scribblenote one is hiway one PCH, the coastal slice, harley highway..etc..)

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-01-24 08:20 AM


long may you ride
darkone
and make us dreamers drool a bit on monday morning

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-01-24 08:31 AM


with their thump thump rattle
and a brag that scatters

~*~

Large men and their big toys...
every boy wants to move
Mother earth...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-24 10:29 AM


...the high of flying

incredible write

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-24 11:24 AM


Mmmmm - sounds like a fun ride with the boys -  course it could be read a bit differently too

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

[This message has been edited by Susan (01-24-2005 12:16 PM).]

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