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roses in my eyes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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you are like the moon without midnight without laughter and you bend perfectly white from the hard kiss of humankind that knocks you at the knees you plead the deep burn of serenity and weep for wooded flowery leaves you are Eve and I breathe you and I wear roses in my eyes and you the ocean and you cast out your nets and I say yes in blue in you in sea-music and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you plead the deep burn of serenity and weep for wooded flowery leaves ~*~ What an image...the sea weeping for want of the forest...  status, m'dear... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
You have such a beautiful mind, girlie - and this poem simply reflects that. To the library!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
one of those mystic soul nights in this - beautifully done- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
well painted |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your poems reach in places of the unchartered and bring them into light most eloquently |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you are a goddes, simple and true |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my god, this is exquisite keeping this jewel |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely lovely! Corinne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and a huge rose for a heart too  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aren't you just the loveliest!!! As always Maree, your polish is by all means, a beautiful reflection. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and you bend perfectly white from the hard kiss of humankind that knocks you at the knees" a beautiful way to express the harshness that reality can be.. cool stuff."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow that was beautiful. I sit under this one like a shade tree and enjoy the breeze of beauty that flows beneath. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Rose petals on the eyes, most exquisite. Beautiful, Maree. Billy 8) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you are like the moon without midnight without laughter and you bend perfectly white from the hard kiss of humankind that knocks you at the knees you plead the deep burn of serenity and weep for wooded flowery leaves ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ smiling at you for the imagery... as always your poetry is unique and lovely. Well done poetess groovy girl  Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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