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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2004-10-24 02:43 AM

angels
     those humanshapes with white wings
that are god's messengers and things

I saw them once

it was in the Poconos....
     No
it was
              that they saw
          me

I walked
         aware
       through the halls
of their judging
              black eyes
       the thin faces all pointed
in MY direction

        they knew human
(were comfortable with)
           and our uncomfortable
                twitch
and the woodenweight across
       our brow's muddy boots

but I

         was
               reforged

    I had killed them before

those that wore
        our fur and bore
live young
           (river warm run)

and they

   in their white
          white
      tails
all
     six hails
                   gave me god's message

and I
        in the lung-emptying awe
of a new believer

        saw

that angel-white

              is the
                     Spark
         carried
                     in All Eyes

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-10-24 02:50 AM

WOW just wow, I can't stop saying wow.

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-10-24 07:18 AM

simply yummy.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-10-24 07:38 AM

Excellent! Wow! indeed....

----------ice
><>

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-10-24 08:44 AM

Bri?

you have a most beautiful soul . . .

This is transcendental . . .
It is one of those things that really cannot be known, but felt deep within the chest, you somehow have written of this, which astounds me.

Amazing.

In awe of your talent, having seen this many times myself, but never really knowing WHAT it was. Thank you . . .

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-10-24 09:02 AM

I get the image of a great hall,

and a hunter's markings of his own greatness,

in taking down the life of something,

perhaps,

greater.

Excellent work, Bri...
I have missed you.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-10-24 12:11 PM

Brian

Amazing!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2004-10-24 01:06 PM

You wrote the magic of the moment beautifully m'bri.

This one has been brewing a long time, methinks.

Beautiful poem beautiful man.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2004-10-24 01:14 PM

Damn!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2004-10-24 02:02 PM

I hope you know this is a masterpiece.
My library has a special shelf for such beauties of the heart.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2004-10-25 02:42 PM

I don't believe you've written anything I've liked better!

And I've liked a lot...a LOT

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-10-25 02:52 PM

Bri...tremendous...

Used to live in the Poconos? Where did you go?

That is a growing area, especially now, since gambling was approved in PA

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

12 posted 2004-10-25 02:54 PM

oooooooooo...felt this ...gave me chills & gooseflesh...

niiiiiice,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2004-10-25 02:57 PM

WOW!! ......Just wow...

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

14 posted 2004-10-27 08:42 PM

Absolutely stunning...being from Pa, I know this sight well, yet fail to notice its beauty at times

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2004-10-27 11:39 PM

i'm with ed, simply amazing writing

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2005-01-24 03:19 PM

Bri?...

just... wow...

I'm sorry I missed this before...
but I'm sooo glad I found it today...

hugs, my friend...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

17 posted 2005-01-24 08:31 PM

missing you Bri

??where are you???

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2005-01-24 08:34 PM

Brian, this is one of your best. At least
I think it is...what a message!!!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

19 posted 2005-01-24 08:37 PM

This is the best of yours. This goes in me library.

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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