Your Escape hurts more then you

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Open Poetry #34

Your Escape hurts more then you

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-01-22 02:55 PM

You drink to forget your pain
Why are you so inane?

Why do you hurt people who you care about?
your eyes they do cry your skin it does
bleed.

The shallows in your face is clear to me
as you stroll down the lane to your next
pint of lager

Escapment from the world of the water and
fish and sea. What is it about you that
just had to hurt me?

I really loved you like I once loved
my first love, I was never really sure
of untill I met you.

Now that is lost and so are you
my instints I can never trust
for the pain you put my through
has made me cynical and depressed

But no I can not let myself get
distrest over you,someone with no
feeling at all.

drink to numb your pain go ahead
so who is going to be there in the
end

Just you 6 feet under the ground and dead
not edited yet but done

what do u all think?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-22 02:59 PM

Sounds like a good heart ache there and written from the heart and quickly.

Good words to look forward to.

Dave

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-01-22 03:14 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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