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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-22 08:15 AM


Blue dye

Ingested in my ear of dine
It plays its vibe upon my spine
Cause my feet to dance a tap
And then my hands to wrap and clap

It vibrate through my very core
Sends my spirit in a soar
Brews me like a cup of tea
To taste the very inner me

Music is my nectars gold
It is my shawl to beat the cold
It wraps me in its web of warm
Keeps me in the dorm of norm

It feeds me in its hold of rhyme
And takes away the thought of time
It is to me the Holy Grail
The wind that makes my ship to sail

It is my other world of seem
It is a seem within a dream



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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-01-22 08:18 AM


Hey Seymour. Love this. Kinda of funny. I am sitting here listening to some of my old favorite tunes and was just thinking of writing a music based poem. You did it for me. Thanks. lol

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-22 08:47 AM


Music is my nectars gold
It is my shawl to beat the cold
It wraps me in its web of warm
Keeps me in the dorm of norm

~*~

So...you've been listening to my music
in this early morning's writing...
I find some Celtic songs best serve me
and my muse...in these wee hours
before the dawn...

vlraynes
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3 posted 2005-01-22 08:57 AM



"Music is my nectars gold
It is my shawl to beat the cold
It wraps me in its web of warm
Keeps me in the dorm of norm

It feeds me in its hold of rhyme
And takes away the thought of time
It is to me the Holy Grail
The wind that makes my ship to sail

It is my other world of seem
It is a seem within a dream"


Absolutely beautiful, Sy...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-01-22 08:59 AM


EvocativeVerse2
It seems we are on the same plain this morning. LOL

Sunshine,
I'll have to get some Celtic music.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-01-22 09:01 AM


vlraynes
As are you my dear.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-22-2005 09:33 AM).]

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-01-22 09:30 AM


good morning Sy

lovely write
another, yet again

I'm amazed at you

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-01-22 09:35 AM


passing,
I think you're pretty amazing yourself.

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8 posted 2005-01-22 11:49 AM


Ingested in my ear of dine
It plays its vibe upon my spine
Cause my feet to dance a tap
And then my hands to wrap and clap

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
and thats when Randy starts to boooogie wooogie.








your rhymes rock Sy-babers.  

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

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9 posted 2005-01-22 07:31 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-01-22 09:59 PM


JM,
Hope you and Randy had a good time.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Thank you Alli.

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