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whiskey
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0 posted 2005-01-21 05:23 PM


" For my love "

If to sleep tonight my last
My eyes in morn wont wake
Then to my love see me
In this darkest day and take

What you once knew as love
Felt in me... my heart
Search and look and find
Another for you a new start

Let my memory last in you
Dont kill it with this greif
For it its love you truely feel
Hold close your soul belief

That gone passed now am I
Looking down from darkened sky
Tonight to see you there
Tear from eye released in cry

Wipe away that shed tear there
I am not forever lost to thee
I await one day close not far
When the time you come to me


"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2005 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-01-21 05:48 PM


Wow-wee!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

Enjoyed.

JL


Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2005-01-22 01:12 PM


enjoyed the sound and flow of this ... especially when spoken aloud

nice writing

If you continue
to think
what you have always thought
you will continue
to get
what you have always got!


DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-22 03:05 PM


There seems to be a real talent that is opening here.

Dave

saved_by_grace
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since 2005-01-08
Posts 332
In the arms of God...
4 posted 2005-01-22 06:56 PM


  WOW, Julie!!  This was truly beautiful!!  This is going to the library!!

Hugs...

God Bless,

Becka

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