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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-01-21 10:08 AM



serpentine
the turpentine flavor
of antigua voodoo
on the wax side soul
of some toothcomb doll

you prick pinned
with the whirlwind
of throne tree fruit

serpentine
it swirls the tongue
of my parchment mouth
blotting the inking
pronunciation

you waft as rafters
on my ceiling's floor
there below your spell

serpentine
the climb of time
onto the lap clock rhyme
to spin handsome
handless round our hours

til demised we entwine


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dark


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-01-21 10:09 AM


you did it again, twice in one day...

ya made me smile, yep ya did.  

Susan
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2 posted 2005-01-21 10:13 AM


entwined- ooooooooh - can wrap myself around this thought

Enjoyed this D -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2005-01-21 10:19 AM


donna, thank you for your reads and smiles.


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susan, serpentine your darn self babe, bring on them huggie mittens.  (grin)

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-01-21 10:22 AM


thems are some pretty powerful tea leaves

ahhhhh the ecstacy of hyppopotomusses...errrr, I mean hypnotism...

On the way to work this morning on the BBC station...they found an abondoned hypopotomus...and explained how they transported him to a wild life refuge, and he adopted a large turtle as his mother....hmmm, sure hope he doesn't get tired and fall on her....

Guess this was on my mind....

Great poem...again and again you unveil your sensitive side...you love machine you

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-01-21 10:27 AM


Lee J, that is just so romantic
a younger hippo and an older turtle
geeze it is almost erotic

thank hon for your eyes and images


inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2005-01-21 10:44 AM



serpentine
the climb of time
onto the lap clock rhyme
to spin handsome
handless round our hours

til demised we entwine
*********************************************
and what a demise it would be
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-01-21 11:33 AM


ms inky...killing me softly
with your mmmmmmmmmmm s

thank you lady for those thoughts

vandana
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8 posted 2005-01-21 12:10 PM


good read
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-01-21 12:22 PM


thank you so much van..
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