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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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serpentine the turpentine flavor of antigua voodoo on the wax side soul of some toothcomb doll you prick pinned with the whirlwind of throne tree fruit serpentine it swirls the tongue of my parchment mouth blotting the inking pronunciation you waft as rafters on my ceiling's floor there below your spell serpentine the climb of time onto the lap clock rhyme to spin handsome handless round our hours til demised we entwine _____________ dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you did it again, twice in one day... ya made me smile, yep ya did.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
entwined- ooooooooh - can wrap myself around this thought  Enjoyed this D -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
donna, thank you for your reads and smiles. _________________ susan, serpentine your darn self babe, bring on them huggie mittens. (grin) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thems are some pretty powerful tea leaves ahhhhh the ecstacy of hyppopotomusses...errrr, I mean hypnotism... On the way to work this morning on the BBC station...they found an abondoned hypopotomus...and explained how they transported him to a wild life refuge, and he adopted a large turtle as his mother....hmmm, sure hope he doesn't get tired and fall on her.... Guess this was on my mind.... Great poem...again and again you unveil your sensitive side...you love machine you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lee J, that is just so romantic a younger hippo and an older turtle geeze it is almost erotic thank hon for your eyes and images |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
serpentine the climb of time onto the lap clock rhyme to spin handsome handless round our hours til demised we entwine ********************************************* and what a demise it would be mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...killing me softly with your mmmmmmmmmmm s thank you lady for those thoughts |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you so much van.. |
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