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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-01-10 03:47 PM



Vapor

my words
turn to vapor
when they hit
the cold air
in these
one sided
conversations
and the only
thing left is
s
i
l
e
n
c
e

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-01-10 04:21 PM


Crystalising in ice

Nice one

dave

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2 posted 2005-01-10 05:02 PM


well done ma'am...as usual you capture with a few words the essence of something many have writen volumes to try and describe...


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3 posted 2005-01-10 05:06 PM


Waste not golden words on pyrite ears. Enjoyed
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4 posted 2005-01-10 06:27 PM


Nicely written!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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5 posted 2005-01-10 06:35 PM


Wow.  hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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6 posted 2005-01-11 12:40 PM


hugs
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7 posted 2005-01-19 11:05 PM


It's a ruse, you do know that, don't you? Too bad it works, gets the person doing the manipulating exactly what his little sociopathic ego requires....a woman crawling.

My advice, if I dared give it....would be to jump off that train now, because it has no brakes.

You deserve better.

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ecrivan
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8 posted 2005-01-19 11:20 PM


I too save my strength for brighter moments


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9 posted 2005-01-20 03:51 PM


Wow...!!!

Eric

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10 posted 2005-01-21 12:54 PM


As cliche as it may sound, silence is golden compared
to the surround sound of a heart ache.

Yes yes,  to what Ed said, it's a ruse, more like a noose,
if we give ourselves enough rope!  Thanks, but no thanks.  

Be well,  Helen~

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