Open Poetry #34 |
Vapor |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Vapor my words turn to vapor when they hit the cold air in these one sided conversations and the only thing left is s i l e n c e just some words cut out |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Crystalising in ice Nice one dave |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done ma'am...as usual you capture with a few words the essence of something many have writen volumes to try and describe... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Waste not golden words on pyrite ears. Enjoyed |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nicely written! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's a ruse, you do know that, don't you? Too bad it works, gets the person doing the manipulating exactly what his little sociopathic ego requires....a woman crawling. My advice, if I dared give it....would be to jump off that train now, because it has no brakes. You deserve better. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I too save my strength for brighter moments |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As cliche as it may sound, silence is golden compared to the surround sound of a heart ache. Yes yes, to what Ed said, it's a ruse, more like a noose, if we give ourselves enough rope! Thanks, but no thanks. Be well, Helen~ |
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