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Catrina
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0 posted 2005-01-20 09:18 AM



That night we downed ourselves
with feathers from the sky
and flew so high while
gaining new perspective

as we counted dewy beads
on silk,

did you know then
that the byhighways
would lead you back
to the ocean
and me?

© Copyright 2005 Catrina - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-20 09:23 AM


this bears signficance to me...for me...crediting your lovely prose and thanking you for such peace.....

beautiful

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-01-20 09:28 AM


siren's song
whispering
lovely destruction

enjoyed it ms kitty

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3 posted 2005-01-20 10:08 AM


Just a quiet little smile for this....and a thought of oceans...beads...silk...

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-01-20 10:10 AM


lady, this makes me Smile...
wonderfully soft and tender writing.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-01-20 06:08 PM


Nice...James
miscellanea
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6 posted 2005-01-21 02:53 PM


Wow!  Simply wow!

   "That night we downed ourselves
    with feathers from the sky
    and flew so high while
    gaining new perspective"

          misce


*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2005-01-21 07:08 PM


Beautiful......

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

ctowen
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8 posted 2005-01-23 04:30 PM


The title was as enchanting as the words which followed ...

              ... hope to read further into you.

                  excellent!

vandana
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9 posted 2005-01-23 04:30 PM


nice
Dark Angel
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10 posted 2005-01-23 10:05 PM


smiling, damn I thought I had replied to this... Beautiful Catrina

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

suthern
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11 posted 2005-01-24 03:23 PM


How could they not? *S*

Beautiful work! *S*

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