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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-20 07:12 AM



let me wake you
with a kiss
and my hands
on your jag lady skin
there under the dawn
and velvet
where whispers glide

and when you open your eyes
will they search in mine
for the love words
that warm your soul
of will they hurry foot
to my mouth instead
to meet for another kiss

that begins there
then runs down
to your bosom store
for a shopping spree
that doesn't stop there
but ends up thigh high
in your deepest pleasure

and will you tire then
and want to rest
just for a few hours
in the cave of my spooning
and shall I set the alarm
so I may wake you again
with just a kiss

and my hands
_______________

Dark



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-20 07:53 AM


ok, so like, off to the shower now...hehe

she will I'm certain, meet you for another warm kiss....

Your a keeper and so are your poems

Hugs for a great day

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-01-20 08:55 AM


I agree with Lee...you warm up these cold mornings

M

Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

3 posted 2005-01-20 09:07 AM


and want to rest
just for a few hours
in the cave of my spooning
and shall I set the alarm
so I may wake you again
with just a kiss

and my hands

~~~

Let's bet.
You don't use an alarm.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2005-01-20 09:17 AM


Thank you ladies for your reviews...and yes ms catrina..my body clock seems to know
when it is time

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-20 01:06 PM


this is soft satin - let me slip beneath it and feel the smooth of you upon my thoughts-

beautiful D - a lovely morning wake up

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2005-01-20 02:46 PM


don't get cold feet
PLEASE!!

thanks hon

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