Open Poetry #34 |
Forever Blonde |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I lean back; my hair flows in a vine, the color of rain, this is a time before vanity or pride took hold, though in dreams i remain forever blonde, no shape contains me; i am thoughtless, a cloudwisp, untethered to skin or bone, and i wrap myself for miles around them, swinging my tresses further back now, free, and knowing, that at anytime, i can catch my own fall, and i remember when i'm with them, i existed once a sapling, virgin eyes of wonder, before the heart was struck by love. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-16-2005 08:17 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess And now you wish upon a star and use magic from a jar. LOL forgive me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
blond is ok if your heart is a red head wink |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Laughing at Dark - men and redheads - ah, but then that is what henna is for And blonde - it is the lovely of spun gold - enjoyed this - especially the thought of once having been a sapling, I like that metaphor Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
liked this a lot!!! miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved it! You rock, sister! .....jo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You're the best. Awesome write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids...the bottlehead blonde smiles |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"swinging my tresses further back now, free, and knowing, that at anytime, i can catch my own fall" *smile* yep.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We miss something of "blonde" I think... The innocense and rapture of forever dawn comes to mind. Smiling at you, TD |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and here I try to keep my hair from going lighter...as I age M (I was a blonde as a baby for one year only) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Blonde....good way to be apparently...inside and out. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think within your blonde indeed lies the heart of a red head. I don't believe the fire is out of you yet gal! Awesome write. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Blond is good, this is great! JL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
No shape contains you?....Looks like a pretty nice shape to me?....Nice breasts?....LOL...how are ya gal? |
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