Open Poetry #34 |
Smokin' |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Daily you seek her drink her inside she writhes within you caresses your pride offers false comfort you accept in a hurry she plays on your lips and drifts all your worries she swirls 'round your head and shadows your eyes she's all that you see 'til the day that you die she's nothing but poison a quick, easy lay knows nothing of virtue and yet do you stay? into your lungs and out through your heart deep in your bowell her poison will dart yet every day, you seek her again yes, she will be there with death, her best friend ~tier |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
exactly why I quit.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, some very honest awareness going on here...tremendous |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, I'd love to send this to a friend of mine who is trying to quit. She's pregnant with her 5th child and has emphasyma. Corinne |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
even watching someone die a suffering death from lung cancer doesn't stop others close by from continuing the habit M |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Somking. Well it takes away great people in hundreds everyday. It is hell in mouths. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Yep, knew there was a reason for not doing it no more. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks everyone for your inspiring comments and congrats on staying smoke free. You are to be commended indeed! Corrine, I hope your friend realizes what harm this will do to her child. My mom smoked during her pregnancy and as a result my lungs were damaged. Two of my children ended up with life threatening asthma from my defective lungs. It's horrible to watch my children suffer from an act I neither did willingly nor approved of. Maybe you can share this with her. Thank you all again, ~tier |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful! Eric |
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