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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-01-19 08:13 PM

“Query this,” said the salty mule,
For he thought he was majesty ~
“Twixt you and I, now who should rule?”
“Query this,” said the salty mule.
Owl quipped, “Let’s decide – we’ll play pool!”
Feathers, hooves, make for travesty…
“Query this,” thought the salty mule
For he imagined majesty.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-01-19 08:16 PM

Errrr, I think I smell a triolet of sorts..
fee fie foe fum.....

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-19 08:42 PM

Delighted by the playfulness in this one Kari. oh and by the way, did I tell you yet thats one wonderful photo of you ya got there.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-01-20 11:24 AM

So we sometimes do.
Heehee! Great write,
and much admire your insight!

JL

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-01-20 11:42 AM

love your new picture to...that ol mule better beware...can't outsmart an owl...teehee, can you see it a mule flying...why he couldn't get off the ground withall that stuff on his back...hehehe, get it...pack mule...hehehehe

OK, I'll be good...
Love your new picture, your a beautiful woman, with a lovely smile....

Thanks for the insight....huggles to ya

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2005-01-20 01:30 PM

A lot of green, but I think you pocketed the 8 ball with this one... Smiles. (hmmmm) What I mean is that this is a difficult style of poetry to write, but you certainly have written a winner. Enjoyed. -Bob

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2005-01-20 03:48 PM

You never cease to surprise or amaze!

Eric

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2005-01-20 06:08 PM

Sunshine all over

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

8 posted 2005-01-20 07:46 PM

liked it

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2005-01-20 08:09 PM

Like the humour in this.

Dave

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-01-20 09:25 PM

Wonder-fun

Enjoyed-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

11 posted 2005-01-22 09:02 AM

Hey Sunshine...I love this. Oh what a precious piece you have here. Made me smile from ear to ear this morning.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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displaced

12 posted 2005-01-22 09:27 AM

hehehe...good one

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2005-01-22 09:32 AM

Sunshine
A beautiful women and a beautiful poem.

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

14 posted 2005-01-22 11:25 PM

This is so nicely written!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2005-01-23 01:11 AM

So they squabbled and they dithered
while their chance for glory withered,
til it they found, amid their spat
they'd been supplanted by a rat!
Leader that he was, he brought
his army, and havoc he wrought;
the ass did flee, the owl, she flew,
for none could face Ratleader's crew!

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MGROVES

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california

16 posted 2005-01-23 01:19 AM

i find much humor in this one myself
but like the turtois and the hare, beware for one might surprise the other

enjoyed

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

17 posted 2005-01-23 11:40 AM

Corinne

suthern

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Louisiana

18 posted 2005-01-24 03:07 PM

Oh... what fun! LOL And what responses!!!

Enjoyed the playtime very much! *S*

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