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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Second Chance daffodils raise their heads as I walk past pretty in their skirts blowing sky high a contrast of the hollow leaves surrounding them I always liked them and wanted them to stay longer but they like everything else lose their spunk me, I am more like those pesky yellow dandelions simple flowers bloom and I still get a wish |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Second Chance daffodils raise their heads as I walk past pretty in their skirts blowing sky high a contrast of the hollow leaves surrounding them I always liked them and wanted them to stay longer but they like everything else lose their spunk me, I am more like those pesky yellow dandelions simple flowers bloom and I still get a wish ............. Helen, Good John PS Tune: “Flower Unlike Flower” A flower, and yet not flower Of mist, and yet not of mist At midnight she comes And at daybreak, leaves. She comes like a spring dream, for how long? She goes like morning dew, without a trace. Po Chu-i |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I LOVE this, Helen and yes! (me too, most of the time) *smile* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Whatever the name, you are a flower whose beauty can not be over looked. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Icebox...yes she is....and you should see her when the wind blows thru the daffodil skirts and up hers...(don't tell her I've been peeking though...she handcuffed me and "took me in" last time she caught me). |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"simple flowers bloom and I still get a wish" Hoping you get you wish today...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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