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Open Poetry #34

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-01-18 11:54 PM

They here
I rot away

Something new
Another part of me
And a lump in my throat
And wet in my eyes

Withdrawn from the household
Alone in my room
Shrinking to myself
Praying for it to stop

The bickering
And complaining
Judgementality

Something new
An evil in the picture
Taunt to me, it recreates in solid form

I could glue it
It is glue
Like an idol
Or an evil image
Just a taunt, a tease by the Devil himself

Again I'm locked in my head
Afraid, but I have faith
With this lump in my throat, I have faith

I'll get something new
I'll just keep
"Waiting"...

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2005-01-19 12:06 PM

*hugs* I understand.

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-01-22 03:11 AM

Thanks and heres a hug back.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-01-22 11:21 PM

Wow...amazing write.

So ya posting in open now?

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-01-23 10:38 PM

Thanks. I'm thinking it wouldn't be a bad idea to dip into some Open Poetry even if its just to see the response I get.

Thanks again.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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